So, I'm back sorry for taking so long to update
Basically I burned the entire first chapter, I hated it and was loosing sleep over it, the major change was Hikari died a few months after legends za.
I am changing Kyra's Misdreavus's shadow sneak attack to backstab, (the one where she teleports behind the opponent) the regular attack will be learn eventually.
Upon reading the early chapters I am improving the word choice in basically all of them, I hate the I remember, or other variations of those words, bleh.
I have tried to make what the hell I am talking about clearer, and will still work on earlier chapters thank you for reading
and here is a new chapter, thank you for 74.6k views