Thanks to a kind soul, I've noticed the elephant in the room and decided to re-read my work. And while I expected it to be a bit rough and that I'd have to rewrite at least the beginning, I didn't expect it to be quite this bad.
Therefore, I'm letting you know that between writing new chapters, I'll also be rewriting the old ones. If you have anything to say, say it now so I can take it into account. Please let me know how it reads to you—I'm just a beginner who wants to tell a story about my world.
This snippet will stay here until it's finished.
Chapters rewritten: 3
Chapter 1 Before the Storm → Chapter 1 The Life That Should Have Been
Chapter 2 Weeks of Hell → Chapter 2 The Beginning of Change
Chapter 3 Voices from the Dungeon → Chapter 3 Voice of the Cellar